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Just A Dot

by Cole Miller

I feel as if I’m a dot
Who’s actually a person
Stranded on an island
Waving my arms wildly
To get the attention
Of a passing plane
That you are sitting in
But from that far up
To you I am just a dot

01/24/2001

Posted on 04/30/2003
Copyright © 2025 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/01/03 at 06:27 PM

i like your imagery here, very effective in describing unrequited attention

Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 05/04/03 at 09:47 PM

We're so small and the worlds so fast, here we find each other down in the grass...JT

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