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by Graeme Fielden

A stuttered moment
Between the lies

The second stands still
In reverent mourning


Posted on 04/28/2003
Copyright © 2022 Graeme Fielden

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/28/03 at 04:26 PM

Dumb struck.The moment.Very subtle.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/25/04 at 10:13 AM

this is so accurate... that tiny moment when a lie is born... and the sadness it causes/creates... excellent... blessings...

Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/04/05 at 05:23 PM

Truth is the pause between lies. This is the silence that speaks volumes before being drowned out by the inconsistencies of a warped soul. Great read.

Posted by JD Clay on 06/07/06 at 11:52 PM

Extraordinary interpolation at work here, Graeme. One second a missed opportunity. The next one playing catch-up. I love it. pe4ce...

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