|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/28/03 at 04:26 PM|
Dumb struck.The moment.Very subtle.
|Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/25/04 at 10:13 AM|
this is so accurate... that tiny moment when a lie is born... and the sadness it causes/creates... excellent... blessings...
|Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/04/05 at 05:23 PM|
Truth is the pause between lies. This is the silence that speaks volumes before being drowned out by the inconsistencies of a warped soul. Great read.
|Posted by JD Clay on 06/07/06 at 11:52 PM|
Extraordinary interpolation at work here, Graeme. One second a missed opportunity. The next one playing catch-up. I love it.