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Red With The Hood
by Kate DemereeRed with the Hood
10/14/2000
By: Kathleen L. Reynolds
What had she been thinking
Walking in that wood
The wind was so chilly
And she only had her hood.
Then there was the basket
Filled with all that food.
The chick wasnt bad man
But the basket
that smelled Good!
It seemed like she was lost there
He thought hed take a chance
If he did not get breakfast
Perhaps hed get romance.
He asked a simple question
And received a cool rebuff
Even in the woodlands
Getting dates was tough
Seems she has a schedule that
She is bound to keep
She wants to get to grandmas
Before grandma goes to sleep.
He offers her some company
She demurely answers no.
He thinks okay to himself
For a short cut I do know
He hurried off to Grandmas house
Of her he made short work
Then on with the nightgown
Attention to detail hed not shirk
When she knocked upon the door
He could feel himself drool
Oh
Come in My Dear
(This was way to cool)
For every question that she asked
He had a quick reply
After all our wolfy friend
Was an up and coming guy
He could have made it in the end
If not for the woodsmans ax
The moment that he saw him
He started making tracks
While running through the gate
Without a backwards look
He thought, Oh, well theres still the pig
Who lives beside the brook
The End?! Perhaps
04/24/2003 Posted on 04/24/2003
Copyright © 2024 Kate Demeree
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/26/03 at 02:13 PM a great recap :) |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/26/03 at 02:14 PM "He asked a simple question
And received a cool rebuff
Even in the woodlands
Getting dates was tough" hehe the best line im sorry i just think this is so brilliant and fun |
| Posted by Jack Lanier on 04/26/03 at 07:46 PM This one reminds me of those rhymes read to me at my bedside, Kate. Thanks for bringing back those memories...Jack:) |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 04/27/03 at 03:13 PM brilliantly funny |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/29/03 at 01:19 AM Funtastic Kate:.....Charlie |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 04/29/03 at 08:45 PM Simply delightful! Loved every bit of it!! |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 05/03/03 at 03:44 PM lol...turned that Fairy tale on it's ear, yu did!.......Cool, hip update, Kate..chock full of witty! |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 06/11/03 at 09:40 PM Funny twist on an old tale! Those wolves, they are always on the look for the next hottie! Lol! |
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