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MOMENT 4

by Graeme Fielden

all
has
abandoned
me
except
loneliness
who
is
my
friend

04/24/2003

Author's Note: This was written to explore the concept of finding friendship in the personification of abandonment & loneliness - rather than as a personal expression of loneliness - Although I do appreciate the messages of support since its posting :)

Posted on 04/24/2003
Copyright © 2024 Graeme Fielden

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rommel Cruz on 04/25/03 at 10:19 AM

i hope this is not what you really are experiencing right now and it's the persona talking.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/28/03 at 04:38 PM

Loneliness is the only friend in loneliness. The good part is the positive approach towards this.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/12/03 at 03:23 PM

Lonliness personified. A scary friend indeeed.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/12/04 at 10:19 AM

that which you stop seeking, often falls right into your lap... great read... blessings...

Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 04/24/04 at 09:34 PM

Ummm ... yes I have that same friend who visits me from time to time .... Awesome work of art!

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/09/05 at 02:37 PM

'all' is a bitch anyway, 'lonliness' and i have always gotten along much better.

Posted by JD Clay on 08/31/08 at 12:56 PM

This is a wellspring of life, Graeme. As Zen practitioner I too seek all things through no thing. I can relate to your quest and your abundant friendship while remembering the vast difference between the chaos of loneliness and peacefullness of being alone.

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