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by Graeme Fielden

is to be with you
when you are thinking
of someone else...


Posted on 04/24/2003
Copyright © 2023 Graeme Fielden

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rommel Cruz on 04/25/03 at 10:18 AM

ouch. that kind of loneliness really stings.

Posted by JD Clay on 04/26/03 at 07:41 PM

An all too trueism. Very introspective, Graeme. Peace...

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/28/03 at 04:51 PM

Longing for the moments of beautiful vibrations.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/09/03 at 11:29 AM

sadly painful

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/12/03 at 03:20 PM

Something so pretty that is also so painful. Nicely crafted.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/12/04 at 10:17 AM

this is perfectly, honestly, brutally true... blessings...

Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 04/24/04 at 09:32 PM

Tears ....

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 07/19/04 at 05:15 AM

Yes, that is very sad...and even sadder, when you are thinking of someone else.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/09/05 at 02:33 PM

perfectly stated, and perfectly true.

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