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by Daniel Peterson

effervescence is brought to life
and breathes
in a hint of your smile

pinkish sunrays laugh
and dance
as they fall from your grace

I gather these thoughts
and perceive
when I close my eyes

the golden, flowing waves
and lashes
that frame your face

in these transitory moments
and times
when I'm forced to think

of a love I would quietly give
and promises
I would tenderly keep

02/12/2001

Posted on 04/23/2003
Copyright © 2026 Daniel Peterson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/24/03 at 02:57 AM

Its a real valentine message. Rather a true Valentine feeling. Objective and loving.

Posted by Traci Mabats on 04/24/03 at 02:12 PM

this is absolutely beautiful. Effervescence-I am so impressed. I cant even say that word let alone spell it.

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