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Midnight Interludes

folds of flesh in shadow
inviting
in the darkness revealed
but shy away
from brightness
lest it illuminates
old wounds that never healed

04/21/2003

Posted on 04/22/2003
Copyright © 2024 Traci Mabats

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/22/03 at 01:52 AM

Very subtle and so distinctly suggestive. Nice piece.

Posted by Madeline Pestolesi on 04/22/03 at 02:06 AM

I really really like your work, I just wish it was longer.

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 04/22/03 at 02:30 PM

Again, a great piece...

Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 01/15/06 at 09:24 PM

I totally disagree w/ Madeline. This poem says all it needs to with brevity and pith. Good job.

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