|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/24/03 at 04:50 PM|
Minimal and so subtle. Yes, if one can defy the gravity of the external, one can capture the moment. A moment which can be stretched as rubber.
|Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/12/03 at 03:17 PM|
Beautiful description of the harsh magic of time.
|Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 11/03/03 at 09:43 AM|
incredibly clever and so intriguingly true... blessings...
|Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 04/24/04 at 09:30 PM|
Yes ... very clever .... I like it!!
|Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/09/05 at 02:25 PM|
well graeme, this is the first time i've read something of yours that isn't prose, and i wasn't disappointed. you sir are a master of words.