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MOMENT 1

by Graeme Fielden

a sandstorm in the hourglass
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04/21/2003

Posted on 04/21/2003
Copyright © 2022 Graeme Fielden

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/24/03 at 04:50 PM

Minimal and so subtle. Yes, if one can defy the gravity of the external, one can capture the moment. A moment which can be stretched as rubber.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/12/03 at 03:17 PM

Beautiful description of the harsh magic of time.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 11/03/03 at 09:43 AM

incredibly clever and so intriguingly true... blessings...

Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 04/24/04 at 09:30 PM

Yes ... very clever .... I like it!!

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/09/05 at 02:25 PM

well graeme, this is the first time i've read something of yours that isn't prose, and i wasn't disappointed. you sir are a master of words.

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