| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/24/03 at 04:50 PM Minimal and so subtle. Yes, if one can defy the gravity of the external, one can capture the moment. A moment which can be stretched as rubber. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/12/03 at 03:17 PM Beautiful description of the harsh magic of time. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 11/03/03 at 09:43 AM incredibly clever and so intriguingly true... blessings... |
| Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 04/24/04 at 09:30 PM Yes ... very clever .... I like it!! |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/09/05 at 02:25 PM well graeme, this is the first time i've read something of yours that isn't prose, and i wasn't disappointed. you sir are a master of words. |
