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Age Version 2.0

by J. P. Davies

Age is a number...
A boundary set by us...
For us...
We use these numbers to decide
when someone has ripened
ready to vote...
ready to drink...
ready to drive...
ready to have sex...
ready to die...
Watch me break all your rules
Age means nothing.
WELCOME TO MY WORLD!!!
Are you scared yet?

04/16/2003

Author's Note: revised

Posted on 04/21/2003
Copyright © 2025 J. P. Davies

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 04/23/03 at 01:40 AM

Well I wouldn't say "scared"... more, intrigued. I love how it starts out quiet, then explodes, then that last line just hushes it again. good job

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