| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/15/03 at 05:34 AM i love it. what an awesome metaphor and powerful closing statement (small frowny face for concept of girl as the weak/dead one, but that's just my feminism talkin) |
| Posted by Kalikala Smith on 04/15/03 at 03:57 PM who knew the doors could inspire such words;) |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/15/03 at 04:10 PM hey, just wanted to add something to that feminism bit above- of course we sometimes feel weak, as in 'weak with desire' or 'dead' from love jadedness. it's not like you're a guy putting women down as weak. i saw the beginning of the poem in an unnecessary angle, and coming back to it, i like it even more and understand it better. and I love that you're expanding on Jim Morrison's brainchild :) |
| Posted by Amanda L Marron on 04/17/03 at 12:11 AM wonderful |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/19/08 at 03:08 PM Striking symbolism. Combination has to be most volatile! |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 05/19/08 at 04:52 PM how true it is... congrats on potd! |
| Posted by Lauren Singer on 05/19/08 at 04:54 PM for a poem with the key words being 'heart' and 'soul' you've gone and taken a cliche idea and transformed it into some quite unique poetry. congratulations! |
| Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 05/19/08 at 10:54 PM Ouch,Well written, strong and to the point. |
