|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/15/03 at 05:34 AM|
i love it. what an awesome metaphor and powerful closing statement (small frowny face for concept of girl as the weak/dead one, but that's just my feminism talkin)
|Posted by Kalikala Smith on 04/15/03 at 03:57 PM|
who knew the doors could inspire such words;)
|Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/15/03 at 04:10 PM|
hey, just wanted to add something to that feminism bit above- of course we sometimes feel weak, as in 'weak with desire' or 'dead' from love jadedness. it's not like you're a guy putting women down as weak. i saw the beginning of the poem in an unnecessary angle, and coming back to it, i like it even more and understand it better. and I love that you're expanding on Jim Morrison's brainchild :)
|Posted by Amanda L Marron on 04/17/03 at 12:11 AM|
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/19/08 at 03:08 PM|
Striking symbolism. Combination has to be most volatile!
|Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 05/19/08 at 04:52 PM|
how true it is... congrats on potd!
|Posted by Lauren Singer on 05/19/08 at 04:54 PM|
for a poem with the key words being 'heart' and 'soul' you've gone and taken a cliche idea and transformed it into some quite unique poetry. congratulations!
|Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 05/19/08 at 10:54 PM|
Ouch,Well written, strong and to the point.