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by Rhyana Fisher

ican'task
ican't
ican't
ican't
i need to be hugged
i need to be held
i need to be touched
i need to be accepted
but i can't ask its not allowed
i'm not strong enough
i'm not wise enough
i'm not smart enough
but i can't ask it's not allowed
i don't belong
i don't know how to change
i don't want to be afraid
i don't understand
but i can't change it's not allowed
i am tired
i am scared
i am alone
but i don't know how to change
i can't change
i can't ask
it's not allowed

05/02/2000

Author's Note: old. verily. circular reasoning there.

Posted on 04/14/2003
Copyright © 2024 Rhyana Fisher

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/03/03 at 03:34 AM

Ya, whats needed is beauty in the form of positive vibrations. Every thing else can follow. You said this in style.

Posted by Quinn Vokes on 05/07/03 at 05:17 PM

i love the style! the circular patterns... and this poem relates to me well, to us all, i think. well done;)

Posted by Nikki Rice on 08/04/03 at 05:31 PM

This is great in both form and feeling. Nice work.

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