|Member Comments on this Poem
|Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/11/03 at 02:26 PM
a fun way to get the message across! Great read :)
|Posted by Ginette T Belle on 04/11/03 at 02:55 PM
this is such a relaxed and fun poem...definitely a good start to a good song...if you write music definitely work this into a song...
|Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/13/03 at 04:20 AM
nice work JOhn :)
|Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 05/05/03 at 02:14 AM
i know that feeling ... well put!
|Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 05/27/03 at 11:49 PM
This is cute! I agree with the others... it has great rhythm.
|Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 06/02/03 at 08:27 PM
Oh God I love this! You may have sparked an inspiration in this dirtygurl:)...Nice work!
|Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 06/25/03 at 02:36 PM
Ahh swweet food and sex poems cant get enough of either one. Isn't it time for lunch! lol
A chuckler. Thank you!
|Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/30/03 at 02:58 PM
Incredibly edible. A delicious read... thanks for sharing.
|Posted by Amanda Conlogue on 07/29/05 at 09:39 PM