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Little snack, baby
by John IlotanI'm just not
Gettin enough, baby
Know what I mean ?
At least a little
Snack, baby
Somethin in between
The real deep
Red meat
And potates lovin
That lately
I haven't seen
I'm just not
Gettin enough,baby
Know what I mean ?
04/11/2003 Posted on 04/11/2003
Copyright © 2026 John Ilotan
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/11/03 at 02:26 PM a fun way to get the message across! Great read :) |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 04/11/03 at 02:55 PM this is such a relaxed and fun poem...definitely a good start to a good song...if you write music definitely work this into a song... |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/13/03 at 04:20 AM nice work JOhn :) |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 05/05/03 at 02:14 AM i know that feeling ... well put! |
| Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 05/27/03 at 11:49 PM This is cute! I agree with the others... it has great rhythm. |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 06/02/03 at 08:27 PM Oh God I love this! You may have sparked an inspiration in this dirtygurl:)...Nice work! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/30/03 at 02:58 PM Incredibly edible. A delicious read... thanks for sharing. |
| Posted by Amanda Conlogue on 07/29/05 at 09:39 PM amen! |
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