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Little snack, baby

by John Ilotan

I'm just not
Gettin enough, baby
Know what I mean ?

At least a little
Snack, baby
Somethin in between

The real deep
Red meat
And potates lovin
That lately
I haven't seen

I'm just not
Gettin enough,baby
Know what I mean ?


Posted on 04/11/2003
Copyright © 2024 John Ilotan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/11/03 at 02:26 PM

a fun way to get the message across! Great read :)

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 04/11/03 at 02:55 PM

this is such a relaxed and fun poem...definitely a good start to a good song...if you write music definitely work this into a song...

Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/13/03 at 04:20 AM

nice work JOhn :)

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 05/05/03 at 02:14 AM

i know that feeling ... well put!

Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 05/27/03 at 11:49 PM

This is cute! I agree with the others... it has great rhythm.

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 06/02/03 at 08:27 PM

Oh God I love this! You may have sparked an inspiration in this dirtygurl:)...Nice work!

Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 06/25/03 at 02:36 PM

Ahh swweet food and sex poems cant get enough of either one. Isn't it time for lunch! lol A chuckler. Thank you!

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/30/03 at 02:58 PM

Incredibly edible. A delicious read... thanks for sharing.

Posted by Amanda Conlogue on 07/29/05 at 09:39 PM


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