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Um, No

by Christel Crews

You said you loved me
Did you change your mind?
You have me, body and soul
Realization!
You're not ready for this at all

Days turn to weeks
and weeks to long months
I pick up the pieces of me
that remain
A mistake, I bow my head in shame

With a smile, you're back
Things have changed
You want to relive those
good ol' days
Now really, after all the abuse and tears

Would I run back after
All these years?

04/10/2003

Author's Note: Dedicated to those who can stand up to their ex and send them packing :)

Posted on 04/11/2003
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/12/03 at 02:07 PM

Assertive. And reminder of this truth that unless there's an understanding no relationship can ever last.

Posted by Vimal Rony on 04/13/03 at 01:42 AM

lol i just loved the way u put it across.

Posted by Delilah Coyne on 04/13/06 at 01:34 AM

Ends with a great question. So many would sadly answer yes. Good poem!

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