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A Dance

by John Ilotan

Wake me with
Your pretty touch
Choreograph
A dance
With slender
Lavender fingertips

Kiss the moonlight
From my eyes
And tell me

That you just
can't
Keep your hands
Off of me

04/10/2003

Posted on 04/11/2003
Copyright © 2019 John Ilotan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/11/03 at 12:31 PM

i love the romantic flow of this poem

Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/11/03 at 02:20 PM

tender and delicate dancing fingers and thoughts! Wonderful.

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 04/11/03 at 03:09 PM

I'm totally in love with your poetry...can't wait to read more...

Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/11/03 at 03:35 PM

soft and hard at the same time - beauty & lust, the sentiment is expressed clearly

Posted by Vimal Rony on 04/13/03 at 12:22 AM

soothing like the zephyr

Posted by Kate Demeree on 04/23/03 at 01:18 PM

Uuuummmmm I love dancing, and you capture here the sensual feel of a slow dance. Very Good Read!

Posted by Lisa-Dawn Sparling on 04/26/03 at 01:53 AM

beautiful.

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 05/05/03 at 02:12 AM

bravo

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/06/03 at 07:16 PM

I love the line "Kiss the moonlight from my eyes"... great job!

Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/24/03 at 04:42 PM

=))))

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 06/02/03 at 08:22 PM

hmmm, thinking I need to find me a personal poet. this is truly beautiful..

Posted by Mike Loftis on 09/11/04 at 05:03 AM

"Kiss the moonlight From my eyes" Great line. Enjoyed the poem.

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 09/25/04 at 11:34 AM

dance is a special theme to me and you do it justice - lovely

Posted by Amanda Conlogue on 12/30/05 at 02:59 AM

oh I love those lines Kiss the moonlight From my eyes And tell me That you just can't Keep your hands Off of me Absolutely gourgeous and passionate.

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