by Roger J Kenyon

My film-noire shadow
suggests evil on a wall.
I doff my fedora,
put out my cigarette
and easier breathe.


Posted on 04/09/2003
Copyright © 2023 Roger J Kenyon

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Doreen Cavazza on 05/12/11 at 08:13 PM

Nice! I like the references. I can't help thinking the last two words should be flipped (breathe easier. This is a time period I would love to visit if I could. A nostalgic feeling of a time I've only been able to see in movies. I like this.

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