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Difference of Opinion

by Leah Laiben

"Our babies would be beautiful," she thought and smiled, but dared not say aloud for fear of frightening him.

"Our babies would be beautiful," he thought and smiled, but dared not say aloud for fear she would take him seriously.


Posted on 04/09/2003
Copyright © 2021 Leah Laiben

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Olivia Weinkein on 04/09/03 at 02:16 PM

so simple, so perfect. these 2 lines pretty much take the cake, ok. lol

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 04/09/03 at 02:18 PM

oh this is great! the sex gap captured so beautifully in two lines of dialogue! Viva la Difference!

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 04/09/03 at 06:16 PM

I love it. it is so true ... hahaha ... and oddly enough the last time I thought that ... i unexpextantly became pregnant

Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 04/09/03 at 09:43 PM

This is the absolute truth. I love this...Verys imply, but well put! :) ~Mel~

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