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Obvious?
by Quinlan L GibsonI think I saw you falling...
turn your head away.
Quickly...don't let me see.
I think I saw you get my point...
quiet the fight now.
Don't let me hear it in your voice.
I think I felt your shell go soft...
my sensitive Cancerian man.
Hurry now, hide in the sand.
Toughen up.
Confusing to feel in and out of you
like a breath.
I think I have your heart sometimes...
then I think I never will.
04/06/2003 Author's Note: An oldie but a goodie.
Posted on 04/07/2003
Copyright © 2025 Quinlan L Gibson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/08/03 at 07:12 PM Yeah...sigh...uhhuh....what else can I say?
Great read Quin. |
| Posted by Britt Zimmerman on 04/09/03 at 02:38 AM "Confusing to feel in and out of you
like a breath." This line just wrapped its fingers around my throat and knotted the pit of my stomach!!!! WOW a new favorite of mine... BEAUTIFUL JOB
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| Posted by Kimberly Bare on 09/10/03 at 07:58 PM Great stuff....I love the last two lines! |
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