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Confusion
by Christel CrewsConfusion strikes
Darkness falls
My balance is thrown away
I look but do not see
Any sign of day.
Once again, I assume
I must bear the test of time
Sit and wait, not to hesitate
but slowly take my time.
I try once more
to stand on my own
I fall down even farther.
How much longer must I wait
To finally face my fate
And restart with no tomorrow 04/05/2003 Posted on 04/05/2003
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Richard D Frederick on 04/07/03 at 12:44 AM a few paradoxical lines ("and restart with no tomorrow" although the next day usually symbolizes a new beginning and clean slate), etc.
however, well formed. good. |
| Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 04/09/03 at 03:29 AM Excellent work of art ... but sad that one would fall so far as to not wanting to face another sunrise ... great piece! |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 09/23/03 at 05:08 AM Hi Christel,
Confusion, good one. never give up, there's hope and faith. Where there's hope, there's faith. And friends to reach out too. Jean |
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