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haiku (Iraq)

by Ulyss Rubey

sacrificed
to feed the starving
SUVs

04/04/2003

Posted on 04/05/2003
Copyright © 2026 Ulyss Rubey

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Boulender on 07/11/06 at 10:26 AM

i dont think you get it, but thats ok. there are many others who share a mindset thats been conditioned to be satisfied by going along with a pack mentality.

Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 07/12/06 at 06:43 AM

aren't comments meant to critique the writing itself, not what we might perceive to be the view of the author?....starving SUV's, quite an original image. simple, evocative, and timely. congrats on POTD.

Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 07/13/06 at 12:45 AM

i actually agree with you, jack. :)) in my view, "the writing itself" applies to form AND content. i was referring to critique of the author, not the content of his work....we should not assume to know the author's mind, just as we should not assume that poems here are all autobiographical....i prefer to critique the poem. perhaps a good subject for the forums or PM ;) PK

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