| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 04/03/03 at 11:49 PM This is deeper than it appears... and very insightful. Great title and a stunning last line! Very well written... |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/16/03 at 04:57 AM Yes, those last two lines do sum it up well and inspire a lot of deep thoughts to go away with. A very effective piece of writing. *applause* |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 03/25/04 at 04:01 PM astounding. A memorable phrase, and concept, the keeper of one's soul. |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 08/22/05 at 12:58 AM You have to sing this to us! Or get James Taylor to do it!!! |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 02/26/25 at 03:32 PM For some reason I felt a deep sadness' as I was reading, and a held breath. I think I could read this over and over and each time find something new. I truly enjoyed this. |
