disjointed by Kalikala Smith can you anyone deem (me) this fight rain hard enough to survive tempt(ation). 03/31/2003 Author's Note: i tried to work with the idea of reading each column down and then being able to read across... but ehh, it's not quite there yet... any suggestions? Posted on 04/01/2003 Copyright © 2024 Kalikala Smith Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Tim J Bono on 04/02/03 at 03:50 AM interesting idea kalikala. Though I'm a bit confused. Maybe space the words out more to clarify columns? Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/15/08 at 08:23 PM i think this might be one that is difficult to portray online because, like previous comments have noted, the spacing and breaks are important. i'd say you're on the right track though - i like the subtle things this poem is saying. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)