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Thoughts at 2:46 pm
by Shayla R CakesMy life is like a bad movie--
Too long, bad actors and a horrible plot.
My life is something I wouldn't get caught dead even being paid to see.
Though if I were dead, the movie would be over.
Fin, The end, no more to see, go home.
My life is the film that people only go to see at the cheap theatres,
and the only reason why they're there is because no one else would be
giving them the perfect opportunity to use the empty theatre as a breeding ground.
I'm a breeding ground for pain, suffering, worthlessness, and constant humiliation.
My life is like a horrendous film.
Siskel and Ebert would have given it two very unenthusisastic thumbs down
My life is a parade of downward pointing thumbs.
Everyone has me under their thumb.
My life is like a really bad teenie movie:
predictable, pointless, not going anywhere.
Someone turn it off. 03/30/2003 Author's Note: When I was on my real name on here...i had this series of works called Thoughts. I think I'll start that up again
Posted on 03/30/2003
Copyright © 2024 Shayla R Cakes
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 04/02/03 at 03:50 PM I like this a lot. I always view my own life in my head as a movie. I even think about the soundtrack often. Like ... if this was a movie, what song would you hear now? |
| Posted by Amanda L Marron on 04/03/03 at 12:09 AM i think you should start the thoughts up again. why did you switch to a pseudonym? |
| Posted by JD Clay on 04/06/03 at 06:13 AM The first scene is nicely scripted, perhaps the second will be like a fortune cookie. A twist with a secret message. Peace... |
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