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Chilly Inside

by Shayla R Cakes

Temperature is relative
To what's surrounding it.
I'm constantly sweating --
The temperature outside seems so hot
Because I feel so cold inside.

03/29/2003

Posted on 03/29/2003
Copyright © 2024 Shayla R Cakes

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Richard D Frederick on 03/30/03 at 01:10 AM

frosty enough, short and clear.

Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/24/08 at 01:42 PM

i'm constantly sweating too...but my hands stay cold. bad circulation?

hehe congrats on POTD.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 07/24/08 at 06:40 PM

Shayla, congratulations on POTD! yeah, I can relate.

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 07/24/08 at 08:32 PM

Me too, congratulations

Posted by Richard Vince on 07/25/08 at 12:19 AM

mm. i know what you mean. very concisely done. :) and, congratulations on POTD. :)

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