in one moment by Kalikala Smith if we (you and i) could take a breath and fly (away from this place) would it be any easier to live? you (and i) could, would, always, never, be free from... life's crazy insanities. even if we (you and i) flew to the ends of the earth (where there is no beginning) would it really be any better? would it? 03/20/2003 Posted on 03/21/2003 Copyright © 2024 Kalikala Smith Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 03/21/03 at 06:27 PM Realistic thoughts that invade our dreams... Nice little poem... Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/25/03 at 04:16 AM The problem seems to be a personal one as well as philosophical, one can easily identify with. The poetry part sounds weak. I wish if you can redraft it. This is lacking the desired flow. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)