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Love on a See Saw

by Rhodora M Fitzgerald

You are like my partner on a see saw...

You have the ability to slowly rise me up
to my highest potential,

the strength and skill to deliberately
thrust me flailing into the air
on an impulsive whim,

or the power to drop me without warning
whenever you feel the need to bail.


03/18/2003

Posted on 03/18/2003
Copyright © 2026 Rhodora M Fitzgerald

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 03/18/03 at 07:30 PM

Interesting way of showing the 'ups and downs' of any relationship. -Mina

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 03/25/03 at 07:37 PM

I could not have put this into more perfect words. This is truly one of a kind. Thank you for the great read.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/04/03 at 01:56 AM

Yes this kind of love has it's up's and down's...Charlie

Posted by Jo Halliday on 05/17/09 at 11:45 AM

yeah, so true! great observation well written.

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