| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 03/18/03 at 07:30 PM Interesting way of showing the 'ups and downs' of any relationship.
-Mina |
| Posted by Sarah Brookes on 03/18/03 at 07:43 PM I love the analogy |
| Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 03/19/03 at 09:13 PM Definately uniquely written...I like the analogy as well! Good work Rhodora! ~Mel~ |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 03/25/03 at 07:37 PM I could not have put this into more perfect words. This is truly one of a kind. Thank you for the great read. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/04/03 at 01:56 AM Yes this kind of love has it's up's and down's...Charlie |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 04/30/03 at 04:19 PM the see saw wouldnt be fun if no one falls flat on his butt. oops. did i say that out loud. lol. nice analogy to relationships though maybe a little more can be added. perhaps the time when they are level? just a thought. |
| Posted by Jo Halliday on 05/17/09 at 11:45 AM yeah, so true! great observation well written. |
