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who am i?
by Graeme Fieldeni am the solitary uniqueness of a parent's loving spawn
that solicits acquisition for addition to the dawn
to complete the supposition, on inquiry to concur
i am the only one and only though my meaning is a blur
to complete the application for a meaning to exist
i've repeat the aggregation that sobriety's a myth
so to ponder my progression on this bicycle of life
it may render much confusion and cause sanity a strife
so the message for conveyance, thus a meaning to be shown
it's insanity's reality and it's this i've always known
03/14/2003 Posted on 03/14/2003
Copyright © 2024 Graeme Fielden
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/15/03 at 06:32 PM Well, whats common Is NORMAL in this common belief society. And the reality is a relative and subjective term. |
| Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 03/16/03 at 09:16 PM I don't know, but I daresay, neither do you (chuckle)! - Quite the piece..clever! - RCat |
| Posted by JD Clay on 07/18/03 at 04:24 AM Great rhyme, rhythm and meter, Graeme. A truly well-turned acknowledgement to an age old question. This one has POTD written all over it.
Peace... |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/16/03 at 05:34 PM Splendid wordplay. I love the banter, it's playful but also has teeth --good mix. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/21/03 at 02:35 AM Really well done, enjoyable and thought inspiring. The flow just rolled right along, good stuff. |
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