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Controversey
by Becca MortonSoft words you whisper in my ear...
The things I've always wanted to hear.
I take a quick drink
I spring up to my feet
You drag me onto the dance floor.
We take a few steps
I giggle, you laugh
Everything seems perfect
The people around us
They watch in delight
I want this night to last forever.
Harsh Words you scream at me
Please, Why can't you stop?
I take a quick drink
I spring up to my feet
You push me out the door.
I yell, you scream
Oh, Please let it stop.
Why do u do this
Is it my fault?
03/12/2003 Author's Note: Hey everyone I guess it is finished...But I have no clue were it came from....I just sat down and started writing...
Posted on 03/12/2003
Copyright © 2024 Becca Morton
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Stephanie Kent on 03/13/03 at 12:29 AM I think it's great the way it is. There really isn't anything else to say. It's very good. |
| Posted by D. Xavier Bari on 04/14/03 at 02:10 AM has a nice before/after effect, like young love gone bad. flashback to prom/fast forward to ever after... |
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