A bold canvas of fire pierces the fragile sky A dark face chiseled against the horizon He runs, an unbroken banner across the plain Horse and sky awaken as one
05/07/2002
Posted on 03/12/2003Copyright © 2024 Stephanie Kent
Very nice imagery. A bit short for me, but still, nice work. -Mina
The shortness for me, on the other hand amplifies the poem, they call it the crack of dawn for a reason :D well done.
