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Ripples in the Water
by Britt ZimmermanYou are the ripples in the water
when it rains
and I can feel you
drip
drip
dropping
into me...
03/12/2003 Author's Note: short I know but it just wanted to end there... nothing i could do ha ha
Posted on 03/12/2003
Copyright © 2024 Britt Zimmerman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 03/12/03 at 08:28 PM i suppose i'm like john on this one.awesome poem though, perfect just the way it is so far as i'm concerned. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 03/17/03 at 01:25 AM Eeeeoeoowww! I think it's stimulating beyond titilation and I love kinky poetry.
Peace... |
| Posted by Deanna M Gritsonis on 03/17/03 at 01:43 AM I really enjoyed it simple yet to the point, keep rockin it. |
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