Home    

wasps asleep on our tongue

by Marina Dawn



perhaps the buoyancy of our
selves has become a question
as seamless as glass, now as a wet foot
heavy on the skin:
a question we ask

our selves in dreams,
as a starlight sifting through your hair

or mouth 
blinding as your voice opening
at last; blinding as the gathering
of water




ii.
perhaps the slowing of our
selves has become hard as held hands,
crows perched in the february
night. perhaps.

until i turn to find you
gone at the center
of the city like a semaphore--
a starlight stretching
across the windows of the street
where you go to sleep,
turpentine.  go to sleep, venom.



02/13/2003

Posted on 02/17/2003
Copyright © 2024 Marina Dawn

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by JD Clay on 02/17/03 at 06:25 AM

WoW! This is a volatile piece Marina . Great effect and alluring title to boot. Nice work. Peace...

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/12/03 at 08:15 PM

A vivid and dark piece. Well-crafted. Thanks for sharing.

Posted by Shirin Swift on 11/07/06 at 07:25 AM

i love this peppery, diverse piece, "perhaps the slowing of our/selves has become hard as held hands", an expansive inner landscape.

Posted by Paul Lastovica on 06/21/11 at 09:05 PM

I haven't read something like this in a long, long time. Excellent POTD; right up my ally.

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)