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by Olivia Weinkein

this leaves me open and breathless
your charm is a cookie
it breaks in half
crumbles
i failed to put you back together
this
and it's all relative really
complete and incomplete
lack of motives, waste of time
cause and effect

so i ate it.
(you'll stop asking why after awhile)

02/11/2003

Posted on 02/11/2003
Copyright © 2026 Olivia Weinkein

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Leah Laiben on 02/11/03 at 06:13 PM

why'd you eat it? just kidding, i liked this...charm'll get ya everytime...posk, k, posk.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/30/03 at 04:17 PM

Love the twists in this one... well done.

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