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Afraid To Commit (to T.A.)
by Melanie A BennettI know the future scares you
You dont like to plan ahead
Children? Just forget it
Marriage? Just the word
you dread
There are so many things out there
On which we dont agree
The only thing I know for sure
Is that I love you
and you love me
I suppose thats all that matters
We dont have to be the same way
We dont have to plan our future yet
We can take it day by day
Just remember sweetheart
Ive never cared this much before
And if it doesnt work out between us
I dont want to date no more
I can honestly tell you
From the bottom of my heart
I never want to leave you
Dont want our differences to tear us apart
Ill always love you honey
No matter what you do
Even if you are scared
I still want my future with you
02/08/2003 Author's Note: This is just a cute poem that I thought of on the spur of the moment about my wonderful boyfriend. The poem is kind of random and not written that well...but it was just my feelings pouring out...I will welcome any suggested changes. :) Enjoy!
Posted on 02/08/2003
Copyright © 2024 Melanie A Bennett
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/08/03 at 04:32 PM This is a very sweet poem Mel...like the flow of it. |
| Posted by Cymbre Dolphay on 02/09/03 at 12:50 AM I like it this way. Nice easy flow, with a great expression of emotion and wonderful rhymes. It's got a soft feel to it. Very lovely. I also like the title as it is. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/11/03 at 02:27 AM Yes, its honest but a bit prosaic. I think this needs some generalization too, so that it becomes easy for the reader to get identified with.No doubt that this speaks and speaks in no uncertain terms.Straight from the heart. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/05/03 at 05:29 AM Commitment is a big step. Nice poem Mel...Charlie |
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