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Sleep Deprivation

by Amanda Conlogue

I choke, spit brackish water
Struggling, recalling

Underwater images and
The inability to move

The weight of water
Still with me

08/20/1997

Posted on 02/03/2003
Copyright © 2024 Amanda Conlogue

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/13/03 at 12:43 PM

Consciousness drowning the dreaming mind? Excellent poem, but I am not sure what direction the title is supposed to lead me in.

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