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Greetings from Dejaville Park

by Bruce W Niedt

Greetings from Dejaville Park,
"Where You Can Make the Same Mistakes All Over Again!"


Dear Bruce,
This place is so cool!
The Indian Land Grab ride was awesome!
Everyone smokes here (it’s the law),
and nobody wears sunscreen.
This morning I played a video game
called “Blast a Hole in the Ozone”,
and a cute girl asked me to sign a petition,
something about a non-aggression pact with Hitler.
We go to lunch today at a place called
the Jim Crow Diner. Then we’re off to
the annual Dodo Shoot. I pick up my gun
in the school gym. Wish me luck!

Your friend,
George

01/20/2003

Posted on 01/21/2003
Copyright © 2025 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by JD Clay on 01/25/03 at 11:45 PM

Twisty poem pal. I like your spin. Cool title too. Peace...

Posted by Nicole Assenza on 12/30/05 at 06:29 PM

It's funny, but sad all these things happened.

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