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Tear stained eyes

by William Teo

Pair of eyes

Sorrow filled

Love to die

My heart is killed

Despairing

World so still

Through my pair

Of tearstained eyes

12/18/2002

Posted on 12/18/2002
Copyright © 2024 William Teo

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quinn Vokes on 01/13/03 at 01:54 AM

amazing... "world so still" gives me the feeling that you're crying and the world is standing still for you, waiting for you to stop so it can go on. i'm loving your poetry!

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