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Ramshackle

by John Harder

Im falling apart
on the inside
I need a rampart
Where can I find shelter?
Not possible to see
with blind saline eyes
I feel like crap
Ive set myself up for the last time
again
Like the time before
Pride before fall
I dont even get the chance
I fall before I know what hit me
Slug to the chest
rip out my heart
I dont care
Im falling apart
anyway
I need to vent
I need a breather
some room to see
Specs in hand
I raise to my glazzies
but I still cant see

11/28/2002

Posted on 11/28/2002
Copyright © 2026 John Harder

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 12/05/02 at 08:19 AM

Well those are situations to learn from. Sometimes being to trustful isn't good. it's hard to change one's nature though. Been there. In time you'll learn to see! Honest narrated good poem!

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