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dawning

In early morning's dawn
The misty lyings rise
No gang of lookers on
To see this dread disguise

11/22/2002

Author's Note: quick thought

Posted on 11/22/2002
Copyright © 2024 Oliver Drewman

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 02/03/03 at 08:38 AM

I love the imagery this evokes. I feel it could have been elaborated on, but still, nice work. -Mina

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