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Let Me In

by Anne Engelen

Your silence is deafening

Your unheard cry

Smothery to one’s soul

These empty eyes of yours

Draw me into a vacuum space

Where life’s been erased

Allow me to touch you there

And banish all despair

Fill your soul with hope

Together we will cope!

 

11/16/2002

Posted on 11/16/2002
Copyright © 2024 Anne Engelen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by JD Clay on 11/16/02 at 04:34 PM

Aptly titled Anne. An interesting piece of shared anxiety. Peace...

Posted by Rommel Cruz on 11/17/02 at 12:02 PM

This is just wonderful. Whoever is feeling down and depressed should really read this.

Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/17/02 at 05:37 PM

Anne this poem is so inspiring, it is beautiful

Posted by Charles J Hannan on 11/18/02 at 12:03 AM

Anne, this is a beautifully created piece!....MUAHS!

Posted by Anne Howe on 11/18/02 at 10:22 AM

this could almost be self talk ...... nice one

Posted by Kate Demeree on 11/10/03 at 05:48 PM

How tender, how softly entreating... and lovely. My favorite line is "Allow me to touch you there" That line could stand alone...

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