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Shadow (haiku)

by David R Spellman

grasping only at
concepts of you even still
your touch evades me


Posted on 11/03/2002
Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/04/02 at 12:38 AM

subtle, yet very moving, evocative. A lot said is such few words.

Posted by JD Clay on 11/04/02 at 03:53 PM

Hmmmm! A contemplative piece, Dave. Nice touch. Peace...

Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/05/02 at 03:12 PM

lovely haiku!! moving one

Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/13/03 at 06:56 PM

very effective haiku... the hand is left floating, wilting in the air after this elusive touch

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