i. the parting gift by Richard Paezjust a drop to wet my mouth, please i feel my lips-and-tongue cracking i have no right to ask you anything but i am thirsty so i'll do my best to repay your favors and despite my thirst try to scrape (myself from you) restore the almost-innocent, just-slightly-tarnished you that dim-shone before dry-mouthed and teething i dammed you (and damned you) in the hopes of fertile fields replanting
(it seems i never managed to inherit mother's green thumb -instead- i became pesticide and defoliant starving to starve all i labeled pests)
i would like to plant another lie and watch it blossom and bear fruit spit seeds that taste bitter(i am what you made me)sweet but i don't think you'd fall for my venus-fly-trickery anymore
i'll ask one more time just one drop please, then i'll leave i know i have no right to ask you but i am thirsty just as you were once 10/28/2002 Author's Note: Written some time after reading tissi’s ‘lesser charm(ed) - cleanscraped.’ Thank you, dragonsister.
Posted on 10/28/2002 Copyright © 2024 Richard Paez
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Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/23/03 at 04:05 PM Tremendous imagery. I find myself thinking on all sort of spiritual themes. Great read. |
Posted by Amanda L Marron on 09/07/04 at 08:39 PM "i dammed you (and damned you)"....my fav line in this piece.....i can't find words to even tell you how much of an awesome writer you are. you are so twisting with your words that i don't think i can even leave you a decent comment worthy of such poems.
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