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Dark Beauty
by Dana E BrossardGleaming in the soft candle light.
Rain beading upon the surface.
Slowly it turns and shimmers.
Almost liquid in the quiet night.
Blade shearing to a fine line.
Beauty yet horror,
In the hands of a madman. 10/27/2002 Author's Note: I'm feeling rather dark at the moment.
Posted on 10/28/2002
Copyright © 2024 Dana E Brossard
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Leandra K Brossard on 03/04/03 at 10:48 PM Mmmm.... It just hums to you... the flow and word selection are perfect. It's not too long, it's not too short, it's just perfect in as many ways as there are... I love the way the emotion changes subtly from line to line... magnificent, thank you.. |
| Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 12/03/03 at 02:38 PM Yes, there is beauty everywhere. A blade, a spider's web. Deadly yet beautiful. |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/11/03 at 04:20 AM all the contrasts so full of the real-life drama of the poetry of witness. The transition of the candle into blade, so terrifying. Superb |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/17/04 at 05:37 PM dark and visually lovely... blessings... |
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