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This is what you've done to me

by Melina Raven Maness Diebold

This is what you've done to me

ruined me

tore me

This is what you've done to me

Oh, with you violent love

No more time for peace with me

leave me be

run from me

no more making love with me

when all you do is hate

How can you expect me to be

your honeybee

get away from me

Are you even hearing me

let me be


All I want is my Prince Charming

where is he

does he want me

Has he even started yet

Find me now


Did he get lost along the way

darkened fray

Gloomy day

Ride your stallion galliant through the night until you're here

Save me from this cruel villain

lover's ire

fury's fire

There'll be no saviour for my heart until my knight is here


Plus fois!

Paladin lover find me now and save me from this demon



No more waiting on my part, I'm no one's now, nevermore


Author's Note: I wrote this to the tune of In THe Hall of the Mountain King. What fun!

Posted on 10/23/2002
Copyright © 2022 Melina Raven Maness Diebold

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 10/24/02 at 12:47 AM

Loved this... and one of my favorite tunes too....

Posted by Lizz Scott on 11/20/02 at 12:54 AM

Nice blend of chaos and uncertainty and yearning. It was fun to read. Think I'll read it again!

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