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Your Name (by Tianna 8 years old)
by Britt ZimmermanI hear your name in my mind
spinning spinning
like a mobile
hanging off the ceiling
10/20/2002 Author's Note: This was written by my 8 year old daughter Tianna. She asked me to post it for her here...let her know what you think!
Posted on 10/21/2002
Copyright © 2026 Britt Zimmerman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by JD Clay on 10/21/02 at 03:21 AM WOW! Tianna (cool name) I think your poem is simply wonderful and I would like to see more. I just started writing poems about 2 years ago, so I'm new at this too. Maybe your Mom can get you set up with your own library here at pathetic.org. Keep up the good work kiddo. Peace...jadi |
| Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 10/22/02 at 03:54 AM Great Job! Mom keep encouraging her... I wasn't writing this well when I was 13 (some would argue I still don't today.. lol) |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 01/24/03 at 09:12 AM maybe if i keep trying, one day i'll be as good as you tianna. beautiful name by the way. keep it up. |
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