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by Travis G Finborg

distance is a loss of cabin pressure


at 35,000 feet


i dont want to be let down


i feel a fiery crash


a loss of control and a feeling


of never touching the ground


im thinking this as our distnace


keeps spreading, opening


wider and wider


she has become


the misty blue mountain


barely discernable on the horizon


i have a sandy blanket of


sun and war to over shadow


the lack of her.


 

09/21/2002

Posted on 09/21/2002
Copyright © 2026 Travis G Finborg

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabrielle L Gervais on 11/07/02 at 06:45 PM

good imagery and form

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