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by Anne Engelen

Common sense is lost
Heart strings are pulled
Affecting our souls
Reflecting our thoughts
Life's no longer the same
Evolving is the name of the game
So, I wonder about life

Just like that

Hopes and dreams
Are never far away
Not even on the darkest day
Never I will give them up
Always we'll be friends
Notice this: "us" never ends

09/01/2002

Posted on 09/10/2002
Copyright © 2024 Anne Engelen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ann Krischus on 03/13/03 at 10:50 AM

This reads beautifully. I love it.

Posted by Charles J Hannan on 04/10/03 at 08:15 AM

This is such sweetness..(((((((((ANNE))))))))))

Posted by Don Coffman on 08/07/03 at 09:20 AM

Really wonderful, the poem flows along just like any other. It's quite a talent to make an acrostic work so well as to not make it's purpose obvious in the reading.

Posted by David Garner on 11/08/07 at 03:32 PM

Notice this: "us" never ends I love the ending to this. So lyrical, such flow.

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