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Epiphany

by Teri T Lahmon

Devalue me
for fear that
As your penis melts in my Euphoria
As you are engulfed swallowed overwhelmed and
broken down by my yonic pleasures
So will your mind and heart be swept away
Your will abandoned
by my feminine all encompassing
Unconditional love.
Because you can not love like a woman
Trust like a woman
Fuck and orgasm
like a Woman
You must make me worthless.

06/19/2002

Posted on 06/19/2002
Copyright © 2024 Teri T Lahmon

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Richard Paez on 09/07/03 at 04:35 PM

Excellent. Ditto everything Aiko said. I don't think you need the very last line (it's implied already, to great effect), but other than that, this is a great poem and demolition of a shallow man's {transparent} attempt to make up for his emotional shortcomings. Thank you for sharing. {m}

Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/09/08 at 02:47 PM

adding this to my favorites, although, i also agree. last line is not needed. man...what a smack in the face. i love this poem!

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