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Unveiling
by Kristine BrieseThe slowly shifting
daylight in my dreams
is unveiling your face,
inch by inch, pore by pore.
The more I see, the more I believe.
The slowly shifting
heartlight in my dreams
is unveiling your soul,
joy by joy, tear by tear.
The more I believe, the more I love.
05/23/2002 Posted on 05/23/2002
Copyright © 2026 Kristine Briese
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by JD Clay on 02/22/03 at 08:37 PM Kinda like peeling a grape. Pure sweetness, Kristine.
Peace... |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 09/15/03 at 04:46 AM A beautiful poem, I love how the two verses mirror each other in a physical/spiritual sense. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 06/05/07 at 07:32 PM Graduation? A borderline consignment, like a flash-forward, as angst grows into poetry - yeh, beautiful poetry. |
| Posted by Michael Smith on 01/20/10 at 06:35 AM Congrats on POTD, Kristine! This is magnificent and truly worthy of the honor. |
| Posted by Amie Golda on 01/20/10 at 10:03 AM Simple but layered and lovely.
And I love these words right here--->"slowly shifting
heartlight in my dreams". A worthy POTD indeed. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/20/10 at 06:31 PM ... congrats on POTD!!! Exceptional..... |
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