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A Man's Revelation
by Quinlan L GibsonI was there.
Left my taste in his mouth.
My flavor,
on his lips.
Revlon Summer Bronze
on the pillowcase,
and his blue glass piece.
He left my price,
on the dresser.
His sin in my temptation
of anything goes.
His wedding ring on the hotel nightstand
with a handwritten
Thank You note.
(work of fiction) 05/23/2002 Posted on 05/23/2002
Copyright © 2024 Quinlan L Gibson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 10/23/02 at 02:43 PM Quinlan, your poems and fictional work are also breath-stealers....and I have no words to describe them beyond wow |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 08/11/03 at 01:53 PM Blunt and descriptive... you take what some would consider a "sin" and lay it on the line with pure facts... What a picture. You can take from it anything you want... |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 09/12/03 at 03:22 PM very well written...captivating and alluring.. |
| Posted by Mainon A Schwartz on 09/17/03 at 05:56 PM I was blown away by the starkness of the imagery-- deftly creating a picture and provoking a thought, both intriguing. |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/03/03 at 04:51 PM BAMSMACKSMACKSMACK. i was beaten up by this. |
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