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haiku 371
by JD Clay
reflecting pond-
a gnat touched the surface
the moon fell in
~ jadi ~
04/16/2002
Author's Note: Traditionally, American haiku are 17 syllables, but Shiki haiku is less strict, and more interested in substance than structure.
Posted on 04/16/2002
Copyright © 2024 JD Clay
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ann Krischus on 03/13/03 at 06:13 PM beautiful. this reminds me of basho. |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 09/14/05 at 09:12 AM whoah, that was interesting and cool |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 12/16/06 at 09:15 PM great visuals here in this one.. great metaphor for love.. ah!.. yes... aloha..;-) |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 09/05/08 at 04:15 PM this is really nice, JD |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 12/14/10 at 12:12 AM Awesome. |
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