| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Lizz Scott on 11/15/02 at 07:08 PM Always playing games! This is a nice piece, an enjoyable read!! |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 06/02/03 at 02:40 PM I can just imagine what lies beyond the pounce...lucky girl she'll be... |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 09/24/03 at 01:57 AM I love how the speaker assumes it will be one of the women to break and not he ;) |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 01/15/07 at 07:25 PM Ahhh isn't this just the way life is... |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 07/25/07 at 09:54 PM Beautifully told and described. Loved how you captured the reader's attention and brought us right there, with you on that pier. Aloha to you from paradise..;-) |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/23/08 at 04:47 PM i'm chuckling at the truth. |
| Posted by Kris Mara on 04/16/09 at 05:12 PM great personality in this....thanks for the smile |
